Michael Angelo Caruso

Apr 12, 20222 min

You can say that again, but don't

Updated: Apr 13, 2022

[Note: This article originally appeared as article content on Michael's LinkedIn account.]
 

Twice as much can be a good thing, but sometimes it's not. One of the easiest ways to improve a speech or blog post is to not repeat yourself.

Unnecessarily long sentences can make your message unprofessional and

disorganized. This is more than just a grammar issue; being verbose is more likely to make you seem dumb, not smart.

Sometimes one can clean up a message just by removing instances of redundancy.

Here are some common examples of how we tend to repeat ourselves:

  • Armed gunman
     
    Circulate around
     
    Close proximity
     
    Completely full

  • Consensus of opinion
     
    Each individual person
     
    Fewer in number
     
    Final outcome
     
    Free gift

  • Future plans
     
    General public
     
    Invited guests
     
    Join together
     
    Large in size

  • Major breakthrough
     
    My personal opinion
     
    On a daily basis
     
    Past experience
     
    Past history

  • Period of time
     
    Predict in advance
     
    Red in color
     
    Revert back
     

     
    Round in shape

  • Still continues
     
    Sum total
     
    True fact
     
    Unexpected surprise

  • Unsolved mystery
     
    Visible to the eye
     
    7 a.m. in the morning

Save your breath with this grammar tip
 

As an added bonus (get it?), let's include the commonly used question: "Where are you at?"

Drop the "at" from that sentence and the message retains its meaning.
 

 
Good grammar like this makes you more impressive. You're welcome.

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You can re-purpose this article on your website, blog or in your newsletter. It will help improve grammar in your workplace and within your team.

Simply send a message to us stating your intentions. There is no charge for this and everyone will think you are really smart. :-)

Consider it a "free gift" -- (see what I did there?).

About the author

Michael Angelo Caruso is an American author and speaker.

He is well known for teaching presentation skills as in his popular, Present Like a Pro, online course.
 

Mr. Caruso has spoken in Australia, Asia, the Middle East and 49 of the 50 states. He spends a lot of time in California, Texas, Florida, and New York.
 

Many meeting planners consider him to be the best speaker in America. Sample his videos and subscribe on YouTube.

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